I think the audio is great. There's a lot of suspense and mystery in your voice. The backing track helps a lot!
The only thing I would suggest is bringing out the voice more as it sounds buried under the music. That should give more presence and warmth to your voice and help you get the message and emotions across. Also, you could play with some EQ to cut off some frequencies from the backing track to help the voice cut through.
Hi, Gordon!
Thanks for sharing.
I think the audio is great. There's a lot of suspense and mystery in your voice. The backing track helps a lot!
The only thing I would suggest is bringing out the voice more as it sounds buried under the music. That should give more presence and warmth to your voice and help you get the message and emotions across. Also, you could play with some EQ to cut off some frequencies from the backing track to help the voice cut through.
Great job!
Juan :)
Just one question. This is your natural voice or you are impersonating? Is your voice this deep and low or are you forcing it?