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  • Adam Clark #1145623904
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    I retract that. It's now at 7sec (because of the intro cut). Don't know what it is but it's there. oh well.

     

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  • Juan Santiago Mendoza #1067143947
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    Hi Adam,

    Thank you for sharing your application with us.
    Yes, right before "To know more..." there is a whistle that could be edited out.
    Also, I would point out the room echo in your recording. Try to record in a place where the sound doesn't reflect that much. Having less reverberation will improve the clarity of your voice and the quality of your voice-over.

    We invite you to visit our community page where you’ll find tips on acoustic treatment: https://goo.gl/vGqUIW
    There you'll find additional information to help you achieve professional results.

    Best,
    Juan.

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  • Adam Clark #1145623904
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    Thank you Juan,

     

    Yes. Upon further scrutiny I found the sound. I am also taking steps to reduce the echo in my space.

    If I may ask, what is your opinion of the read? Also, what is the time frame on being able to audition again?

    Thank you again for the feedback.

    Sincerely,

    Adam

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  • Juan Santiago Mendoza #1067143947
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    Hi, Adam!

    Generally speaking,  I like the read. I think it sounds professional. As a suggestion, I would encourage you to try a more friendly tone. I like the color of your voice, but it may be a little too serious.

    What if you try a more natural and conversational tone? 

    Also, I think you can achieve a more natural rhythm. I feel you have a nice flow by idea, but towards the end I felt the deliverable was composed of individual sentences edited together, rather than a complete read. 

    Let me know what you think!

    Best,

    Juan. 

     

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  • Adam Clark #1145623904
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    Hi Juan,

    I really appreciate the great feedback. I agree that my "Hello" was a bit stiff and the flow at the end could have been a little smoother to tie the last segments together. I found just lately, that if I give my audition pieces and few extra reads before recording it achieves more of that natural tone I need.

    Do you have any idea when I would be invited to audition for Voice Bunny again?

    Here is the link to my commercial demo if you are interested,

    https://soundcloud.com/adam-clark-445136871/commercial-demo

    Thanks again,

    Adam

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  • Angela Serrano #830202147
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    Hi Adam!

    You will be able to request another application when you login. Just click on the "Click here to continue it" link and you'll be added to our queue. A new project will be sent to you in the next 7 to 31 days after you've been added. 

    It can take this time due to all the requests we have in queue + the new applications we get every day. Your patience there is super appreciated :)

     

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