There is a boost in the low frequencies that makes the voice muddy and hard to understand. Try recording farther away from the mic, to reduce the proximity effect and achieve a cleaner take. Besides that, I suggest you try a more natural and conversational tone. At the moment it sounds to flat and robotic, the main reason why our client reject work.
I agree 100% with Juan Santiago. The recording sounds super boomy and muddy which makes the voice hard to understand. I'd also like to add that the editing sounds quite unnatural as the recording doesn't sound conversational. Please make sure you make the edits on areas where the voice's flow is not interrupted to avoid a robotic sound!
Hi Brendan!
There is a boost in the low frequencies that makes the voice muddy and hard to understand. Try recording farther away from the mic, to reduce the proximity effect and achieve a cleaner take. Besides that, I suggest you try a more natural and conversational tone. At the moment it sounds to flat and robotic, the main reason why our client reject work.
Best,
Juan.
Hi Brendan!
I agree 100% with Juan Santiago. The recording sounds super boomy and muddy which makes the voice hard to understand. I'd also like to add that the editing sounds quite unnatural as the recording doesn't sound conversational. Please make sure you make the edits on areas where the voice's flow is not interrupted to avoid a robotic sound!
Hope this helps :)