The enunciation I believe it's a matter of practice and, if possible, acquiring a coach that can help you with your speech. When you are a voice actor, it's very important to be very good at enunciating as you need to ensure anyone listening to you can understand every single word. We have compiled a good list of resources that may be helpful for you when looking for a coach and/or training in voice acting. You can read it here: https://help.bunnyinc.com/hc/en-us/community/posts/115000468024-3-Ways-to-Learn-More-About-Voice-Acting
Hi Trevet,
Listening to your sample I've identified these issues:
-There are mouth clicks/noises throughout, make sure you drink plenty of water before recording to prevent that.
-There's room echo and some kind of background noise (could be a computer fan or A/C?).
-The enunciation of some words is not entirely clear. There are places where it sounds rushed. Remember to read slower than you normally do.
Hope that helps,
-Seb
Hi Trevet!
I agree with Seb's comments.
Mainly, the enunciation and room echo are what I believe needs to be fixed the most. The room echo and background noise are completely created by the space so it's important to review how you're treating your space. You can find some recommendations on who to fix this cheaply here: https://help.bunnyinc.com/hc/en-us/community/posts/203461624-Tip-5-Basic-acoustic-treatment-is-not-rocket-science
The enunciation I believe it's a matter of practice and, if possible, acquiring a coach that can help you with your speech. When you are a voice actor, it's very important to be very good at enunciating as you need to ensure anyone listening to you can understand every single word. We have compiled a good list of resources that may be helpful for you when looking for a coach and/or training in voice acting. You can read it here: https://help.bunnyinc.com/hc/en-us/community/posts/115000468024-3-Ways-to-Learn-More-About-Voice-Acting