Sage Advice NEEDED on reverbberbebrb!!! As my application turned down because of this!

Hello all, thanks in advance for any light you can shine on my darkened path :))

I submitted my .wav file of my audition and this came back There is audible room echo (reverberation) impacting your recording. Please ensure you record in an acoustically treated space. If you already have acoustic treatment, it may not be adequate.

So I have been to other community posts and seen the tips for blankets, having a carpet in the recording space, recording in a small room and am going to make a new space with this in mind.

My questions are in regards to this recording:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1E4Zvsg0VDAST6CYN7dVHrP2CyPrIRxTC/view?usp=sharing MP3

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ZhpkcnH08rgSj3SYksIvF3T1PxOuqG5h WAV

A: Do you think there is too much reverb on the recording?

B: If so are there any things i can do in Audacity to fix this and make the track acceptable?

C: Any other pointers

Again thanks very much for your help and advice

Simon