Unfair rejection!!
I believe the work I submitted for Pilot FriXion Fineliner (6133f417-2b5d-4c39-93b6-245969f9f254) (https://voicebunny.com/projects/79B295949334ACC9EB31) was wrongfully rejected. the reasoning (it just sounds like you're reading the script) to be unfair and unfounded. I do not believe that any one would contest the fact that the recording I submitted was executed with dynamics and energy. I formally request that the rejection be removed from my stats.
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Hi Nathaniel,
I've revised the project but unfortunately, it doesn't sound completely fluid. It sounds as if several sentences were edited together so it doesn't sound like a complete, cohesive take. The second sentence has a completely different tone/intention than the first one. Also, there's hesitation in the last line in ' 12 colours in stationery stores'.
Also, you mispronounced some words like "diagrams" & "mistakes" so I'm afraid the rejection must stand.
Perhaps I had some editing and diction mistakes, I still don't hear them my self, but I'm not perfect, and we all make mistakes. However I still object to the original rejection based on my acting performance. The claim state that " it just sounds like you're reading the script". I did make maltiple records for different take so as to make the best recording that I can. I may have broken up sentences doing so, That being said, none of them were just reading off the script.
Hi Nathaniel
I have to agree with Sebastián on this one. The recording doesn't sound cohesive and gives the impression that you're just reading the recording due to the discrepancy in tone and fluidity. It's important to consider that edits should be carefully placed to ensure the tone, pacing, and cohesiveness of a voice over match between each other. If this is not met, the recording will sound off and could give off a different message from what you were intending.
I'm really sorry, but I have to agree the rejection was correct and will count towards your stats.