Feedback for reinstatement
Hello,
Here is another sample for evaluation. I have tried turning down my mic and positioning it at a slight angle to my mouth in an effort to reduce plosives and mouth noises.
https://soundcloud.com/user-678975671/anthony-sena-foodtvshowsizzlereel
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Hi Anthony,
Great job, noise is almost gone, same as plosives!
A few more things to work on and we'll be ready to go:
1. 0:08 breathing after 'consumption', please keep in mind that breaths should blend gently and naturally with the read. You can achieve this by controlling your breathing carefully, softening your breaths during editing, or removing the breaths altogether.
You're doing a great job with the breathing in 0:14 and 0:28, try to be consistent with that.
2. 0:15 editing issue 'electric stoves'
I know this might be annoying for you, but we're almost there, keep up the good work!
Cheers