Feedback on revised audition
Hello Voice Bunny!
Earlier this year, I submitted the following material for review and was told there were numerous technical things that needed to be corrected.
https://1drv.ms/u/s!Ap3q3pJeCUUL2Ugfk5RMMkU8nrBM?e=vfazv2
I built an acoustically treated booth, redid the script, and this is the result.
https://1drv.ms/u/s!Ap3q3pJeCUULgP4v1VIH9wduXx1k7g?e=ldcYmR
Can you provide feedback on the revision and tell me if anything else can be improved?
Thanks so much!
Stephen
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Hi Stephen,
Welcome to our community, we're very happy to have you here.
We shared your file with one of our Quality Control agents, it is sounding great! There's only one small thing to work on before we can move forward, seems like you could take better care of some plosives on your audio.
It has an easy fix tho, option one is having a pop filter, but if you already have one, option two is to place your mic at a slight angle so the air of your consonants doesn't hit the mic's capsule directly.
Do you think you can try those suggestions and come back with new audio for us?
Hi Johnatan,
Thanks for getting back to me! I do already have a pop filter in place, so I repositioned the mic slightly and here is the resulting read.
https://1drv.ms/u/s!Ap3q3pJeCUULgP56N6Nv5YFzJxVQzA?e=H3S50E
Stephen
Hi Stephen,
Thank you very much for this new audio, it's sounding better, however, we still noticed a couple of plosives that might end up in a revision:
Do you think we can do something to work on those too?
Once we get a hang on that, we should be ready to move forward!
Hi Johnatan,
Here's the revised reading. I repositioned the microphone so that it sits slightly above the mouth, and this is the result:
https://1drv.ms/u/s!Ap3q3pJeCUULgP8h2OoRpjHItjOB6w?e=JmrTGG
Thanks for helping me work out the kinks!
Stephen
Hi Stephen,
It's been a true pleasure helping you!
So, I took this sample and shared it with one of our QC agents and this is what we got back:
Sounds good to me!
Seems like you did it!! Congratulations, if you can replicate this on your future submissions, you shouldn't have trouble with revisions.