Feedback on my spot
Hello Voice Bunny QC,
I'm a professional VO actor, have a great agent, have booked many national spots, and my submission to be a VO talent on your site was rejected and the reasons were plosives, room echo and breath noise. Could you listen to this broadcast spot that I recorded at home and let me know if you hear those things you listed in the email? Thank you.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/6jab7o8tpq53n3q/BeWaterSmartTipsTK2_1-2.aif?dl=0
Best,
Wendle Josepher
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Hi Wendle,
Thank you for reaching out, we hope you're having a wonderful day!
Do you think you can send us a sample without music? that's the best way for us to evaluate your sample.
Looking forward to your new sample :D
Hi Johnatan,
Here's the sample, thanks!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/fkjs4gavbz95pal/BeWaterSmart.mp3?dl=0
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Wendle
Hi Wendle,
Thank you for this new sample, It does seem like there is too much room echo on the recording, something that would definitely get a revision from our team.
We have a post that might help you with that: Acoustic post
Please, give it a read, try some of those suggestions and come back with new audio for evaluation
We'd love to hear more from you :D
Hi Johnatan,
Thanks for the Acoustic Post suggestions, very helpful. I tried a suggestion and recorded again, here's the file. Thanks for your feedback!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/xlxll3sbv3daeb4/BEWATERSMART6.mp3?dl=0
Sincerely,
Wendle
Hi Wendle,
Thank you very much for being so kind in receiving feedback.
We just shared your sample with our team and it seems there is still room echo un your recording.
How would you feel about sharing pictures of your recording space with us?
It'll help us to deliver more accurate feedback to your environment.
Hi, here are photos of the recording space. I sit on my piano bench under the blanket which falls down my back and encapsulates the space. Thank you for your feedback!
https://www.dropbox.com/sc/0lu4b9hp4c5d3eb/AACSZHNKOxXePgRe_9MeeWDaa
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Wendle
Hi Wendle,
Thank you very much for sharing!
It seems like you could benefit more from making some changes to your recording space. It would be best to have a more treated acoustic environment, some Pros find this inside closets or small rooms where they can stock thick materials on the walls as well as having carpet on the floor, do you think that could be a possibility for you?
Hi Johnatan,
Thanks for the information! I re-recorded from inside a closet, here is the link. Thank you for feedback! : )
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1pr3dl8i6suz3ee/BeWaterSmartNewRecord.mp3?dl=0
Best,
Wendle
Hi Wendle,
Thank you for this new audio, unfortunately, we're still picking up boxiness on your recording.
Do you think you can share pictures of your recording space with us? Maybe it'll allow us to give you more specific suggestions