Not hearing these Plosives or Mouth Noises that they are talking about...

So I received a few revision requests this evening. Fortunately, nothing related to background noise or an unwanted room echo because I'm recording in my sound booth... but I'm getting rejections due to plosives and unwanted mouth noise. I'm using a Rode NT1-A with a Scarlett 2i2. Maybe it's just the headset that I'm using, but I've played through this recording repeatedly and can't find any microphone pops or unattractive mouth noises that are making this recording unusable. I mean, I've heard mouth noises in AAA Video Games -- nothing major, but I think we need to discuss expectations.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1dsqOoz0BZppfxLss1AIghx92ddN-kTlW/view?usp=sharing