Audition Rejected due to over-processing and plosives

Good morning all! Looking for some help on the feedback I received from Bunny about my audition audio. It was rejected due to too many plosives (which i can hear and am working on) but also for being overly processed, but I used 0 processing on my file. I was wondering if someone could help me identify what the fix would be or what I'm doing that sounds overly processed.

Thanks in advance!

Here is a link to the audition audio I submitted:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/17NTXu1OGg1mkxC8MNfeySP4RoKAN3LuW/view?usp=sharing